Grim Defeat
chapter nine of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban
The students spend a night in the Great Hall as the teachers search for Sirius Black; Snape takes over Lupin’s class for a day and is more intolerable than ever; and in a Quidditch match amidst a thunderstorm, Harry is overtaken by dementors and loses the match.

Percy… had been prowling between the sleeping bags, telling people off for talking.
(by Cambryn)

“Have you any theory as to how he got in, Professor?”
(by Tealin Raintree)

“Detention, Weasley,” Snape said silkily…. “And if I ever hear you criticize the way I teach a class again, you will be very sorry indeed.”
(by LMRourke)

But at that moment, another flash of lightning illuminated the stands, and Harry saw something that distracted him completely – the silhouette of an enormous shaggy black dog, clearly imprinted against the sky, motionless in the topmost, empty row of seats.
(by Tealin Raintree)

And then a horribly familiar wave of cold swept over him, inside him, just as he became aware of something moving on the field below….
(by Helene Sirois)
about the chapter
Something You May Not Have Noticed
In Harry’s first year, the students considered it a really big deal when Dumbledore showed up for a Quidditch match, as though it were an uncommon occurrence. Now, however, it’s not even noted that the headmaster is present until he runs out on the field to save Harry from falling to his death. It’s possible he still doesn’t attend often, came to this one because he was nervous about the conditions and dementors, and that the team simply didn’t see him because of the storm. But I think it’s more likely that ever since Harry’s near-catastrophe in his first match (when Quirrell tried to buck him off his broom), Dumbledore has been a faithful attendee of at least the Gryffindor matches. That way he can keep an eye on Harry – and after all, we know he is a fan of professional Quidditch, so why not his house’s team as well?
The Wizarding World
I know wizards are substantially hardier than your average Muggle, but it still seems a bit excessive to me that they would allow the students to play a Quidditch match in a torrential thunderstorm. With only six matches a year, would it really be that big of a deal to postpone it a week? I wonder, if a student were to be struck by lightning, what would happen. Perhaps their brooms carry some sort of anti-lightning charm so they’re protected wherever they go.
Life at Hogwarts
The Gryffindor team is outraged when Slytherin gets out of their match, but I can’t help but wonder how the Hufflepuff locker room responded when they were suddenly assigned to play. The conditions may favor Hufflepuff because their Seeker is bigger, but they certainly haven’t been training for the match the way the Gryffindors have, as we consistently see the teams stepping up their training when a match is approaching. So wouldn’t that be a huge advantage for Gryffindor? And as a result, wouldn’t it also be a matchup that Slytherin wouldn’t particularly want to see happen either? Gryffindor’s Chasers certainly outscore Hufflepuff’s by a wide margin….

As to the lightening strike.. it may interest you to know that unless the players were grounded, there’s little the lightening could do to them. You can stand on electric railway tracks and not be harmed, unless you touch the ground at the same time.
Lizzie said this on September 2, 2009 at 9:13 pm
Ahh, yes of course! I should have thought of that, but of course I have my head in Muggle games which are (so far as I know) all played on the ground.
Still seems rather dangerous for the spectators though, no?
John Kearns said this on September 2, 2009 at 11:52 pm
Thought you might want to know that there is a typo in one of the quotes:
“Detention, Wealey,” Snape said silkily…. “And if I ever hear you criticize the way I teach a class again, you will be very sorry indeed.”
Weasley is missing the s.
berlin said this on October 24, 2009 at 8:21 pm
Thanks berlin – fixed.
John Kearns said this on October 24, 2009 at 11:35 pm
The dog, again…
Paula said this on October 27, 2009 at 10:58 am
I find it interesting how Snape expresses to Dumbledore his fear that Lupin may not be entirely trustworthy. Makes me think of the (many) times Harry has voiced similar thoughts about Snape. And Dumbledore’s answer is the same almost verbatim: “No way. I trust him.”
Valeria said this on October 29, 2009 at 2:45 am
I still don’t know why any character would question Dumbledore’s decisions. Its Dumbledore! To trust him is to trust his judgment. On whomever. I realize though that they are only 13, and its hard to look past Snape’s ‘redeeming’ qualities, lol. Snape is just a tool sometimes. Although I may not like him as a person, the fact that Dumbledore trusts him is enough for me. :)
Sarah 'LeStrange' said this on January 15, 2010 at 7:16 pm
I’ve heard a lot of people say that the dementors are attracted specifically to Harry, and other refuting, saying that in this chapter, they are only drawn by the arena full of emotion. Mightn’t they also have sensed Sirius’s presence?
yraM said this on March 19, 2010 at 7:24 pm